I'd have absolutlely no qualms about putting your fly in my display box. Personally, I think you've done an admirable job with your wings, the color and material selection are wonderful, and you've taken great care with some of the details that many tyers (IMO) tend to overlook.
While I'm devoid of the 'Kelson Gene' and am certainly no critic, I think you've dressed a very nice fly. I also admire your 'moxy' in posting it at the risk of 'slings and arrows' from sometimes hyper-critical and opinionated fellow tyers.
Good work, man - good work.